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Will You Dance With Me In The Rain
Posted on April 3rd, 2012 No commentsYou gave the passion to the kiss,
and showed me love does exist;
you ignited the fire and the hot flame,
but tomorrow after the sunrise
when I look into your eyes I wonder,
will you feel the same?
And if the sun doesn’t shine tomorrow,
will you dance with me in the rain?* Inspired by the rainy Santa Cruz, 3/31/2012
4 responses to “Will You Dance With Me In The Rain”
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Michele,
Does the last sentence have a double meaning?
Also, a good way to describe the risk in a new relationshipWell done!
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Michele Sun April 9th, 2012 at 23:03
It does have double meaning, and from time to time I like to include hidden message.
People often like the excitement and uncertainty (of a new relationship), but that burns off fast then what’s left?
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ray wallin April 19th, 2012 at 21:20
In reading your recent poems I was wondering are they directed at a certain person or are they intended for a wider audience? You have such intensity of emotion and feeling. And, your insights into relationships is excellent.
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Michele Sun April 23rd, 2012 at 18:37
Recent entries are inspired by someone/events in life; for instance, this was written after our Santa Cruz run and it was raining hard the night before. Words were floating in my head, like code floating in programer’s head on a good day 🙂
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ray wallin April 8th, 2012 at 08:13